review after final draft of research paper.

This paper is different from the first one because of the overall goal. For the first paper we  had to interview people from our field of study, and elaborate and dissect the type of writing preformed by individuals in this field. we had to elaborate people in our desired field and use there interviews as a guide or basis to explain the type of writing used in their field. then for this paper we were preforming research to support our position on a view, and I picked the corruption in the pharmaceutical industry. I had to find sources that supported my view along with addressing and adhearing to an opposing view as well.  this paper required a lot more work in my opinion, but at the same time it educated me on more things I was unaware of. This paper ultimately had us giving facts for colid support on our position.  In our first paper I feel like I possessed a lot more knowdge regarding the topic prior to actually writing and interviewing.

If you look at the movement from rough draft to final draft I hope you are able to see some improvements.   I fixed grammatical errors along with trying to add some more supporting information, I used the tips that were presented by Mr.Paudel. I added another source that supported my view but I needed one that supported the opposite view. I couldn't find a reliable source pertaining to the opposing view of my argument, so I used a source that supported mine but contrasted and made it clear to why an opposing view could be seen. also I tried adding in a clearer thesis and hopefully it will help. But for my first draft I would say that I used an outline because I did create one, except for the fact that I changed my topic the very last second. So in reality I threw my outline out the window and I just went with flow. I good some topics and I ended up deciding on the corrupted pharma industry. from there I started researching and tried narrow down the most relevant evidence or points that will support my view. Once I found the main ideas and support I would use throughout my paper I began to write.